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I kinda hate all the other characters so 4*. The kid was fine but he ended up spending a bunch of coin on her and bringing a kid around to gates on purpose is sort of inappropriate?? Especially with the sudden adoption. The other guy doesn't do shit but still got fame instead of MC as if he beat the boss in the tutorial. He doesn't really try that hard to say otherwise but ig he made an attempt and they didn't believe him in the interview. The sister tsundere is low-key annoying. And then the other girl is the bane of my existence. Being the best at PvP isn't really a good look when clearing gates has people's lives on the line, just makes it look like you're a selfish prick. Other than that she constantly suspects MC for no reason like "how did he know the rabbits running away from us are scared? Sus." She acts like she doesn't even know what a gate is and nobody else should even though she clearly does, an all around weirdo.

Meh. It feels like barely anything has happened so far. The girl he meets at the academy is so annoying, she's useless but got a massive ego. She rides on his coattails too His goal isn't that interesting either. I'm kinda hoping the magic saves this but he's not really the type to show his abilities or put people in their place.

FL is only pretending to love ML BC she suspects him of being a murderer and wants to spy on him. She's kinda weird like she's book smart ig but she lacks common sense imo. She still thinks he's the killer but at this point there's no evidence. Turns out the killer does not need to be a tall man because it's poison disguised as strangling, the knot is used by everyone who's been to the military academy and presumably people from the region it originated from, and honestly the book bio saying he's a suspect basically confirms he's innocent. If he's actually the culprit then you've ruined all suspense and it feels like a spoiler. If mystery isn't the focus then there's no reason not to state he's the culprit outright. ML is surprisingly cute when you see things from his perspective. I don't have a problem with 2nd ML but I don't like how they're pushing him, it feels artificial to build drama between main couple.

Ngl it's pretty bad. The story doesn't make that much sense and they've got no chemistry. You're just never given a reason to care. The bad luck curse or whatever is literally never explained and presumably doesn't go away. Tagged shounen ai but the side stories are 18+.

Love hate relationship with the dad. Can be frustrating but I like the MC. They start it off as her just trying not to die but really she's after more than covering her ass she obviously cares about her dad.

Really good. They executed the plot twist so well I considered it then wrote it off, only for it to be real and still make sense. Interesting conflicts and creative fights. MC looks to have a good bit of depth. Amazing art too. If I had one gripe it'd be that the women are weirdly perverted? It's not too bad most of the time just kinda weird/creepy.

3 might be a little harsh but idk the conflict in the latter half felt rushed. The idea is good though and their personalities are cute. Only the extra contains smut.

MC is trying to give Loyd a run for his money with those faces. The comedy is pretty good, story is not bad. The fights in more recent chapters haven't impressed me though. It's easy to forget he's supposed to be strong when every single enemy he's like "omg this person is so powerful I can't beat them yet I will have to use my final ass pull".

Top notch comedy and adorable ML. Would love to see FL's feelings develop though.

MC is a little dense but not awful. ML is adorable. If we get more romance or a deeper plot I'll probably bump the rating.