axima's manga / #shoujo(231)

Gallahan (the dad) is perfection, a god in human form. I'd give him my life if he just asked nicely. ML hasn't appeared since the prologue but seems cute af, and FL is a fun character too. She's nice and proactive. I wish she'd be a bit more like Athy and excessively shower Gallahan in love, but that's my only complaint. EDIT: I've been waiting for the romance and there really doesn't seem to be much going on. This matters because the series isn't a daddy issues fantasy, Gallahan doesn't get that much screen time.

I dunno, might turn out good but ML is still emotionally constipated and FL doesn't know what she's doing. I wish she'd forget about looking for an fl that might not exist and just date him herself.

Good shit. FL is op in certain areas, but clueless in others, as this sort of semi divine being. ML is generally a really nice and reasonable dude. You could say the plot hasn't unraveled yet so my opinions are limited. So far the romance has been cute and the FL slowly discovering the intricacies of human life interesting.

At first it's cute and funny, but with the introduction of a well thought out plot it's become even better. For one, Clea actually matters past providing a body for FL to inhabit despite truly being dead. EDIT: Later on the plot starts to stall, things randomly get resolved in one or two chapters, and Isaac is revealed to a gaslighting possessive psycho while Clea remains oblivious. It's kind of a tragedy with how she thinks she got her happy ending even though she never had a choice in it. Pahn was fumbled too, he's just post reveal Isaac but from the get go, and when they get around to explaining his background it barely explains anything and feels like a cop out. None of these characters even have a reason to like Clea, the ones they state don't match up with reality.

My fav part is how Harry and FL both have zero concept of personal space with each other. Otherwise, it's all pretty solid.

Not terrible, but not impressive. Interesting premise that ends up boring as time goes on, even though it's still original. FL that has only 1 or 2 defining moments that show any real personality. ML is a bit of a bitch. He's impulsive to the point of idiocy and overly violent. I've seen a few well done tyrants but this one falls flat because his victims are sometimes completely innocent, and no, going back to heal them doesn't mean it's fine now. EDIT: Despite how much I shit on it here, I ended up liking it quite a lot. I don't know if it grew on me or if I just forgot the parts that bothered me early on. FL definitely gets her shit together more later on and ML becomes pretty cute. Fuck Carine though, he can suck a fat one.

Hoping this becomes a 5 star. EDIT: Dropped, couldn't keep my interest.

mangago why did you have to go down now I have like 20 reviews to write... This is good shit, I'm impressed with the authors ability to write their kinks in to the story, both the leads have a brain. They're not exactly being romantic but they ain't distant either so it's fine. Just enjoy the view ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°).

cool premise, decent execution. Nothing of note with so few chapters. EDIT: Angst is good enough until about 20 chapters in, but after that it's in this weird spot of not making their relationship much better or worse so you're just wasting time. I'm not touching this again until there's a kiss. EDIT: Dropped, is this a tragedy or something? I don't think they're ever getting together because Violet has a stick up her bum.

Where's the romance ffs? They barely see each other at this point. MC is also a little bit dumb (I've seen worse).