Really not much. The progression of MC's feelings doesn't make much sense it feels pretty random. The thing with the brother never really gets tied up which bothers me, he was basically harassing ML and you don't even confront him about it? The mind reading doesn't end up being used for a lot even though it's there. The last chapter is all about sex and frankly just unecessary, It's not interesting, adds nothing of note to the story other than just being weird, and the actual sex scene probably isn't even long enough for people to get off on it?
Kimi to Ishin Denshin!