Ferrid's manga / #Fantasy(631)

Ch 13 Meh characters Meh story Meh everything

The love the main love interest has for the MC is strange but I hope it will be explained later on. I am a fan of the corruption that is being uncovered and delt with

I love the themes of dark and light. two sides to a person. The mask you present to society and your true feeling. I just hope everything goes right

I like it for now but someone please explain the magic system to me. How can the MC do so much in some situations but so little in others? Also, where are the consequences!?

I'm not a huge fan of the "being in another world with a smartphone" aspect of this story but it is a nice read

sounds like an okay premise but the story and characters matches the art. Shoddy

The intro is a drag. There isn't anything to latch onto until you start uncovering the secrets of the world. The only problem is that some of the character choices and the worldbuilding make absolutely no sense and all the build-up to solving the mystery is a bit lackluster. It's still a decent read, it just needed more work before it was published. Not sure if I'll continue but I am curious what will happen now. 161

It's a typical OP cultivator story. it gets realllllyy repetitive and man are there way too many characters to remember. Also, the time skips are awful and the panel pacing is bad. 275