The Creepy Obsession of an Internet Sugar Daddy
Insomnia
Sadistic Beauty BL Sidestory
Story full on red flag. No more, no less than that. Art is not bad thou, I'll give you that art 7.8/10 And the author based the victim out of her hate to a real person??? Wowsers.. to even admit it, have no remorse to the victim while relentlessly abuse him and keep the mentality of "hE wROnGeD otHerS sO he DeSeRVeS iTtt!!!" Wow, wow, wow Seme rapes, tortures and break uke [wrist of the feet], kidnaps, put a collar on uke, tries to make him dependent (but kinda fails? cuz uke knows better than that, but uke is alone in the world so uke just stays with him).. etc. Uke is pushed to his wits ends and becomes depressed, alcahoolic, at the end tries suic1d, is 'saved by seme, feels kinda thankful to be alive, seme can't keep it anymore so lets him go but uke is broken and again, he doesn't have anyone to rely on so he just stays with seme (I kinda wished he had just died back then, him keeping on feels surprisingly unsatisfactory.., yep just felt rushed, a bit over the place, I don't remember liking any characters -not even Minho who is the victim+havent done anything too too bad (like, gathered from the flashbacks and little tl notes that put me in the unread main story {which doesn't seem worth reading}, lacks character but-i don't even rmbr,- he wronged others, nothing that held them back for life, but he's still charged with a life in unhappiness and abuse..?) but maybe the author/story is just bad, I didn't enjoy it alot.. Ps: that's such a badly done review but I'm tired and my mind is cloudy.
Takopii no Genzai
Takopi (not this one, but the original name can be deciphered to "time leap") is a happy alien from Happy Land. In a hungry state after arriving to Earth he meets Shizuko-chan who kindly offers him 'school bread. Takopi feels touched and grateful by her gesture and decides that he's gonna thank her by making her happy-pi. It's no easy task- he tries to show her his happy-gadgets but nothing seems to work through depressed, bullied, abandoned and lonely child that Shizuko-chan is. Using the happy-camera Takopi can travel back in time to when the picture was taken, and after Shizuko-chan commits SU1C1D3 from the loss of her dearest dog Chappy, Takopi travels back more than a hundred times trying to prevent this outcome and help out Shizuko-chan(test answers, finishing lunch, avoid worse bulling) but after all he's never able to save Chappy. Until finally, he ends up unintentionally ki11ing Marina-chan, the bully, and finally sees Shizuko-chan smile happily. They meet with Azuma-kun (a kid with inferiority complex that likes the idea of being the only choice/savior one*desperate* has). Azuma-kun helps them hide the body and make plans to visit Chappy that supposedly is at Shizuko-chan's papa's house over summer. The three of them end up becoming friends and always having fun after school. The body is eventually found and Azuma-kun decides to take the blame (Shizuko-chan suggested it, saying that she'd wait for her savior's return) which ends up pulling wravoc in his house. First he told his Onii-chan, after having a heartful encouraging moment from him (Onii-chan told him that Azuma-kun could count on him, that he'd always encourage him and not mind their mother much) After that Shizuko-chan goes alone to Tokyo (Papa's place) where she's met with a father with another family and that pretends to not know her. Distraught and without seeing Chappy, she blames them of having eaten him, and decides to open their(half-sisters) stomach to check (guess she kills them) Sachiko-chan comes back after months(got Takopi's gadgets) to the same place she met him, where he was waiting. Even after having recalled his memory and actual goal (to kill bad Shizuko-chan for Marina-chan' happiness) and talked to Azuma-kun about how people capability of being both good and bad, Takopi decides that he still wants to make the kind for giving him bread and fun to be with Shizuko-chan happy. So they stay broken together crying for a long while, until Takopi decides to make a last effort and use his happy-magic to turn back time one more time, for Shizuko-chan would never be and smile happily no matter how long they'd go on. That time without him, but some remnant memory of him, and on a better track. Shizuko-chan cries for him to stay, promising that she'd smile if he didn't leave as he disappears. This last time leap, with his remnant memory, made Shizuko-chan and Marina-chan grow closer, Chappy stayed safe, they all became happy, and Takopi made his last effort really worth it. GAAAAHHH that was so sad I wished to see that Takopi would just go back to his Happy Planet, or be revived by his mama who he didn't say last words to but I guess that's it. It's still good that he completed his goal. Everyone ended up happy and safe because of his efforts so good job to him !!
Double Trap