smolfluffball's manga / #bl(160)

dumb baseball boy meets dumb garden boy and they like each other but garden boy is scared of heartbreak again.... but baseball boy convinces him to try. reread april 2025: it was badly paced and the sex scenes happened so freaking quickly, a bit jarringly. like the second story in particular was so snappy to get into sex that i was literally drawn back from it like??? okay????? i guess?????? i won't probably reread it bc it's not... there was stuff that wasn't explained properly and etc etc. meh plot, meh characters, meh romance, but nice art!

no problematic stuff really but it truly went 1 to 100 in one chapter like... sex in chapter one is just wild!! but it's not surprising pfff. the art was okay, not the best i've seen, and the plot was pretty... bland... i liked older brothers story more for sure

the fact that the translators didn't like the story is SO FUNNY TO ME???? also okay review here: not a great plot but it really had potential! if there was more exploration into michiru's psyche that'd help flesh out the plot more instead of just having the dumb characters have sex like 4 times in the span of 6 chapters. the pacing was really bad and the romance was sorely underdeveloped :( also would have commended the main boy if he didn't capitalize on the fucking date rape drug that was used as solely a plot point ahahaha but that's expecting too much. like... just don't read this again it's not worth it since the only thing that really saves it from a one star is the art style bc it is!!! really really pretty!!! but no substance!!!!!

I CANT BELIEVE I NEVER MARKED THIS DOWN ITS ONE OF MY FAVORITES NOOOOO

i deeeefinitely like the authors other stories much more than this one, but this was also good!! the stupidity and naivety of both boys was kind of fun to see but also like.... why.... really? they were cute together though, once they got together! wish there'd been a little more clarification as to the time they'd known each other but what can ya do

not horrible!! thankfully!! the main story doesn't even actually feature any sex scenes but there's a sequel that does so eh. there were some jokes i didn't get and there was some crybaby type boy but it's alright... was not a bad read, not at all. plot made sense to me and the romance was cute and they were both dumb as shit which is always fun. huge love and preciation for the fact they waited and waited for sex and there was literally no non-con anywhere <3333

meh kind of but not bad enough to actually tag it that way :') the main character and the "leader" of the "gang" was kind of annoying :/ the story would have been better if there was more backstory between the trio of friends, and like... more growth in the characters but oh well. not the worst thing i read but probably not anything to reread any time soon.

idk what else to tag this with but i did enjoy it, despite the three stars... only reason it gets three stars is bc the sex things happened with little buildup and were a bit jarring and could have been longer or something idk. that aside, i liked the story and the characters and it was cute!!! the plot was fun and i enjoyed that there was a little social media stuff mixed in with the later story so a good time

i can't even say i didn't like the plot because i did actually oopsie. like rou being dumb and overly caring toward a different dude (niko my love omg) and yoshino being a bit uncomfy and disgruntled <333 v good, let them grow, force their relationship to develop a bit yes yes yes. big love for niko!! i want to see him get his own romance bc he seems like a fun character but alas, alas. (i was lowkey kind of shipping niko and rou for a little bit like bro.... hmmmmm)