Hana's manga / #smut(70)

This might just be me but I feel like the story was a bit hard to understand or rather I didn't know who anyone was until like the last chapter so I didn't know what was going on and it was just a mess not in a good way. I feel like this had the potential to be 5/5 but the pacing was weird and they focused too much on the sex in the first few episodes. I love smut as well but in this it didn't work so well. I do love the art tho and that it actually tried to have a plot and it wasn't that basic. It's a 3.5 but since there are no half stars it gets a 3

Bruh this should have a perfect rating. It was soooooo much fun. The original story is about 10 chapters long but it's great with a nice twist and some action( not really but kinda) and a bunch of sex. After that it's just side stories about the couple with minimal drama a lot of wholesome shit and even more sex. This is how you do smut. They have amazing chemistry and there's respect and they're careful with each other and there's an actual plot, which even if the focus is on sex I appreciate. One of my all time faves for sure. Also this is just personal preference but I really fuckin loved that they were both switches hell yeah. Also also the art is amazing honestly it'd be worth reading it only for that. OK I reread it it's def. not perfect and there are a few iffy things but it's still a good read.I wish it was longer and the characters and the story were better developed but it's still great.

There are a lot of things that are wrong with this. 1st of all that's pedophilia (I'm not sure what the laws are in Japan but in my country it would be illegal) second of all he raised him so that's weird. 3rd Akito is horrible he just does whatever he feels like even without consent and 4th characters that dumb piss me off soooooooo much. If you ignore all that or maybe if 1 and 3 were not present then it would be kinda decent. Actually I checked it the legal age of consent is 13 in Japan but it still feels icky

It's nice to see fetishes and the sex scenes were kinda fun but otherwise it was meeeeeeeeh

I wish there was more of a story or that they showed how they felt more in depth from the beginning. I'm really happy that there are more and more mangas about fetishes it's always fun to see stuff that's not completely vanilla. (✯◡✯)

This is pretty cute, it's mostly just them fcking but it's kinda hot and I liked both mcs although we don't really find out much about either of them.

Hell yeah some fun smut. There's not much story but it's really hot and fun to read. Both stories are great but I wanted more of the 2nd couple.

This is fucking great agdbebahns. The plot is really basic but I love the characters and the sex scenes are amazing. They're both idiots, it's really cute. Also there are a few kinky scenes nothing extreme and they're not long but they're nice.

It's fun but it's sooooooo short

Minimal story lots of sex although that shouldn't be surprising cos porn is in the title so. I don't really have any complaints it just wasn't doing the most so 3/5.