Hana's manga / #one shot(21)

Well it's pretty good but there's only one sex scene which is upsetting

Now you see this is the problem with oneshots they are TOO FRICKING SHORTㅠㅠ I want moooooooreeeee

Hpmf I'm giving it 4★s because it's too short I wanted a sex sceneㅠㅠ but this is really cute otherwise^^

I'm not into incest but I like the author so I gave this a try and instead of being disgusted I was just incredibly sorry for big bro I mean I have younger siblings and to think that you ruined them in any way it's unspeakable. This is tough because the blame doesn't come from others here it comes from himselfㅠㅠ

I mean it's cute I'd love it if it wasn't only one chapter like this feels too short and there's also no sex which is very very sad

It's four starts cos it's fun but I wanted to see them in their own position if that makes sense

I don't usually read doujinshis but this was fun

Ok there's no story it's just porn which is fine but reading the word asspussy and throatpussy make me lose any and all interest. Also the becoming female stuff made me uncomfortable like wtf no. Also also monster cock lol

OS so there's a story that's 3 chapters long and then there are 3 one shots. The first story is pretty much pwp (porn without a plot) but it's kinda cute so that part gets 3/5. The 1st one shot was my favorite story vise the thing is since it's a one shot it didn't work well. I wish it would have it's own manga cos like this it felt a bit messy 3.5/5. The 2nd one shot is a nope from me. I really didn't like that no one would believe you shit also sexual harassment like tf. And it's supposed to be ok cos he was nice once no way in hell 2/5. The 3rd one is pretty cute and innocent although I was like wtf at the end. You can't just drop a bomb like that and then end the story like???? Wdym. I wish they either left the time travel part out and made it a basic high school story or they showed how it affected the future or something. That gets a 3/5