yuukisakura's manga / #I dropped(161)

Too many plothole

I drop...Art good...chp15 still not finish introducing things...may the author writing skill grow and become better.. Cz this might be their early stage.. Gambatte

From the spoilers, this seems like a really good story that I would enjoy.. But the story adaptation is soo annoying? Not good? Disappointing? And I'm pretty sure it's not the translator fault because one indo language translation I read somewhere else is almost if not exactly as this..