ni-ka-CHUUUUUUUUUU's manga / #fragile uke(1)

Breath

Complete | Ochi Chifumi | 2003 released

Really liked this concept of this manga. It was twisted and dark yet sweet and I loved it. My main issue are the few plot holes. Like they never addressed why the twin was obsessed with the uke. I really wish they elaborated more on this reason like the reason why the twin slept with so many dudes was to isolate the uke and making him dependent on him. And his side story about finding a new love was pretty good because while it was short they didn't force an instant relationship. I'm peeved that his fine with letting go of the uke considering he's a psycho but I guess that's the only way you could end it. I also didn't get why the seme's past lover was included in the ultimate climax. I get why he's in the manga for exposition and conflict of the seme but I don't get why he even agreed to team up the twin. (Side note: the seme was fucking stupid even though the uke called him that he got locked in his room and that he's worried about what his brother will do HE FUCKING IS ALL COOL ABOUT IT AND IS LIKE "OH ITS PROBABLY THE DELIVERYMAN????) Also kinda disappointed there was no incest scene between the twins (but I guess he wasn't THAT YANDERE then) Reread 2024: lol I can see why I was into this back then. Definitely pretty lame and melodramatic but still gets the heart tugs here and there