Monsieur.'s manga / #Smut(186)

There's too much lacking. We know nothing about the seme, and the uke knows as much as us. And I can't feel any kind of emotion concerning their romance.

The idea was great and not that common. But then... The plot. It just seems that the author wanted to draw sex but it wasn't enough so they tried to give it a plot but it didn't work one bit. It was so focused on the sex parts and their own selfishness that I couldn't feel any romance in this. And the end... 6 chapters full of sex (some forced and then the incongruous threesome attempt) just for an attempted forced "murder" at the end. Just common sense huh but wouldn't that have logically been the first idea (or suicide btw) ? Because we all know those are the worst sins for heaven... I would have thought of sex as the last resort... But well, that's manga, there no real logic. And I really thought the all point of the story was to make them realise they liked each other and confess and that would make him stay but oh well, I'm not the author after all. I won't rewrite the story, but I didn't like it. I just put up with it because it was short.