Monsieur.'s manga / #One Shot(79)

Ça aurait pu aller dans un bon ou un mauvais côté. Cet auteur a choisi le mauvais côté. En même temps, si l'auteur avait choisi de "bien" faire la chose, ça aurait trop ressemblé au manga d'un autre auteur avec le même "phéromones qui attirent tous les types". Donc bon. En vrai, il aurait fallu changer toute l'histoire.

That was really good.

Not bad but not that great either.

Is this really a one-shot? Too bad, but it's cute.

Not bad but the thing about the collar was ridiculous. It's said that the sub can choose to take it or not in the Dom/sub universe presentation. There's nothing said about him not being to take it off whenever he wants. And those command were ridiculous. "eat" "come" "look at me" and that's about all the commands there was in this story. Even my dog gets more commands than this.