Monsieur.'s manga / #Fantasy(131)

Too bad. It could have been really good and I love the art. But the pacing is all over the place. We jump from one scene to another with no real connections. Seems like the two lives together in the end but I'm not really sure. Feels like the author gave us a summary of what she was supposed to do. Weird feeling. It had a lot of potential.

The idea was great and not that common. But then... The plot. It just seems that the author wanted to draw sex but it wasn't enough so they tried to give it a plot but it didn't work one bit. It was so focused on the sex parts and their own selfishness that I couldn't feel any romance in this. And the end... 6 chapters full of sex (some forced and then the incongruous threesome attempt) just for an attempted forced "murder" at the end. Just common sense huh but wouldn't that have logically been the first idea (or suicide btw) ? Because we all know those are the worst sins for heaven... I would have thought of sex as the last resort... But well, that's manga, there no real logic. And I really thought the all point of the story was to make them realise they liked each other and confess and that would make him stay but oh well, I'm not the author after all. I won't rewrite the story, but I didn't like it. I just put up with it because it was short.

Unsatisfying.

C'est mignon mais j'ai l'impression de lire un truc écrit par un ado. C'est immature et sans profondeur. Rien pour me donner envie. Ça fait juste passer le temps. C'est dommage vu que les dessins sont super beaux.