alice-chan's manga / #smut(122)

1st story- plot is very typical/ cliche but it was a better read than expected. it was light and pretty cute but too fast-paced (I guess that was expected tho) 2nd story- the uke-looking seme (didn't like that) is a spoilt brat who fucking pisses me off. what did Harada-kun do to deserve such a pain in the ass?? (literally lmao) he's way too good for that useless piece of trash

no plot, sex scenes aren't even good, boring. waste of time

Ik this is a oneshot but still

read for the smut, got more than I was looking for ~ really good pacing actually, considering the it was a one shot. it even seemed completed, unlike many one shots that give the feeling like a lot of the story is missing. although the sex scenes were hot, the ending was cute. arguably the best smutty one shot I've read

thoughts while reading (up till ch5): so fast-paced and rushed, I thought it would be sweeter and fluffier but it's actually kinda dark and I don't like Ibuki at all. it's just sex which isn't a bad thing but it's not what I was looking for when I started reading this. well, the concept is interesting when I finished reading: okay so both the seme and uke are unstable as fuck, their relationship is toxic and the angels are psychotic meddlers (how are they even angels). ending is super unsatisfying, even the plot twist was eh. just overall disappointing

the art is AWFUL the only reason I read it till the end is because I read it ages ago and it was really bothering me so I reread it, but it was so hard to get to the end bc it was so bad

it was pretty cute but I'll probably forget about it by the end of the week

the art was gorgeous, the story was interesting and the smut was hot. the characters were cute and there were funny moments. on paper that sounds like my ideal yaoi but somehow there's a lot of things I'm unsatisfied with (still giving it 4 stars tho) I agree with the comments, something was off. the ending was unsatisfying somehow, even though technically there's a nice little happy ending tied in a bow. again, like a lot of people in the comments are saying, the uke didn't get to express his own sex appeal and potential, and the same 'got it all' but the uke didn't; he didn't even get his talent acknowledged by the seme. Also their whole relationship feels a bit one-sided because it feels like the seme doesn't see them as equals, neither in bed or business. well, I'm glad their love is mutual, that was really cute, but I'm also unsatisfied with the sex scenes because they stopped right at the best part EVERY TIME ╥﹏╥ to conclude, I wish there were some more things explored but overall it checked all the boxes for me and I liked it a lot, will def reread !! ~

the smut was very hot but the plot line was confusing and rushed- too many things/events/flashback stories happening in too little time. the trauma explanation was also too fast. I'm glad their relationship developed into a sweet nurturing one but even so it still happened too fast.

it was more entertaining than I thought it'd be, and I liked the format where they don't talk until later and there's a lot short inner thoughts. it was very refreshing and a unique format. the other stories were okay too, but the first story was the best. very light and funny and interesting, had a nice balance of sensuality and comedy (people walking in on their flirting/dirty talks and them not giving a shit was hilarious)