alice-chan's manga / #hot(34)

porn without plot pretty hot

(first story) it was so cute and funny but also made my heart clench at the (cliche) sad part. I would say that the plot was kind of typical, but that makes it impressive that the story was so enjoyable. I personally really liked the seme's personality, even though in another setting I might have not, and the seme and uke go really well together. Overall really enjoyable! the other two stories were a mess

really well-paced for a one shot

pretty hilarious but kind of all over the place the ending felt kind of abrupt, but it was still pretty cute

the smut was very hot but the plot line was confusing and rushed- too many things/events/flashback stories happening in too little time. the trauma explanation was also too fast. I'm glad their relationship developed into a sweet nurturing one but even so it still happened too fast.

it was more entertaining than I thought it'd be, and I liked the format where they don't talk until later and there's a lot short inner thoughts. it was very refreshing and a unique format. the other stories were okay too, but the first story was the best. very light and funny and interesting, had a nice balance of sensuality and comedy (people walking in on their flirting/dirty talks and them not giving a shit was hilarious)

the smut was SO hot, and I would've given it 5 stars probably (I expected it to be light, without a deep plot, and smutty, and that's what I got) but I didn't expect to get a second story after the 1st 3 chapters, so I was disappointed. I don't even remember the second story (writing this literally 2 days later), but I do remember that I didn't like it much, so yeah. I've reread this a couple times for the smut (the first 2 chapters. I actually like the first story quite a lot, wish they made it longer)