I think it was too short and thus the plot was too rushed. Their emotions felt really shallow because the development was so abrupt. Also the it was way too predictable, I knew what was going to happen from the first chapter. Honestly the best part of the story was the friend. Also I really dislike seme looking uke's, it makes me uncomfortable, but that's my biased opinion. Although my review sounds really negative, it wasn't that bad- I've read worse. I think if it was longer and more developed, it could've been a good yaoi manga.
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