alice-chan's manga / #One shot(19)

I think it was too short and thus the plot was too rushed. Their emotions felt really shallow because the development was so abrupt. Also the it was way too predictable, I knew what was going to happen from the first chapter. Honestly the best part of the story was the friend. Also I really dislike seme looking uke's, it makes me uncomfortable, but that's my biased opinion. Although my review sounds really negative, it wasn't that bad- I've read worse. I think if it was longer and more developed, it could've been a good yaoi manga.

so freaking hot gave it 5 stars for the smut honestly didn't read the story lol

porn without plot I guess u can see it on the cover

it was pretty decent for a one shot. I think it has a realistic view on relationships, but I do wish it was longer so there was more room for plot and character development

porn without plot pretty hot

really well-paced for a one shot

oh, you know, just Ayumu and Tojou continuing to be ABSOLUTELY FUCKING ADORABLE