the art was gorgeous, the story was interesting and the smut was hot. the characters were cute and there were funny moments. on paper that sounds like my ideal yaoi but somehow there's a lot of things I'm unsatisfied with (still giving it 4 stars tho)
I agree with the comments, something was off. the ending was unsatisfying somehow, even though technically there's a nice little happy ending tied in a bow. again, like a lot of people in the comments are saying, the uke didn't get to express his own sex appeal and potential, and the same 'got it all' but the uke didn't; he didn't even get his talent acknowledged by the seme. Also their whole relationship feels a bit one-sided because it feels like the seme doesn't see them as equals, neither in bed or business. well, I'm glad their love is mutual, that was really cute, but I'm also unsatisfied with the sex scenes because they stopped right at the best part EVERY TIME ╥﹏╥
to conclude, I wish there were some more things explored but overall it checked all the boxes for me and I liked it a lot, will def reread !! ~
Savile Row no Yuuwaku