(first story) it was so cute and funny but also made my heart clench at the (cliche) sad part. I would say that the plot was kind of typical, but that makes it impressive that the story was so enjoyable. I personally really liked the seme's personality, even though in another setting I might have not, and the seme and uke go really well together. Overall really enjoyable!
the other two stories were a mess
Kawaii Obaka-kun