seeeeenpai's manga / #Water colours(1)

Shen Sheng

Complete | Xuan Zhe | 2000 released

I want mooooore. Okay first of all, the Art style is amazing. All the characters look so gorgeous. And it all looks like it was made in water colours. I really really adore that. And now the holes. The beginning is made badly. They came together after a few interactions? I thought the teacher just played with his heart because he acted like a playboy. I wished the beginning would have been more detailed and longer. I think the author just wanted them quick to be together. It bothered me a lot. The story is cute though. It is manly just fluffy and a bit of dramatic. And that's fine by me. The relationships in this Webtoon aren't really complicated. The teacher knew he couldn't continue on, if he stayed as a teacher. So he quit. But that wasn't made dramatic at all, what is okay too. It was just a thing that was made on the side. Like it wasn't a huge decision. Another hole is that they just got together without really knowing anything about each other. This point is like the one before. I think the author just wanted to skip to the fluff. And then the thing with the teacher's brother. If this is the real ending then it is a pretty bad one. What happened to the brother? Why did he die? What happened before the MC's lover became a teacher ? So many questions are unanswered. It is such a huge mess. But because the story still made my heart flutter, I cannot give it a too bad rating. The MC is sooo sweet. But it bothered me a lot that he didn't apologize to his friend for kinda ditching him. I mean they kinda planned to do something on his birthday but he forgot and had a night with his bf. I mean yeah that can happen but he didn't even apologize for that. His Character is so sweet and gentle. So it seemed unlike him. I mean even you can't fully forget about that, can you? Even after years, he still didn't remember? I mean obviously the friend was hurt. Not from the fact that he ditched him but the fact to see him with his bf. I think the author wanted the friend to get over his feelings for the mc so badly that he made the mc look like a bad friend. And now, the relationship between his friend and his brother. I personally don't like it. There are so many holes in the relationship between them two. Okay, we know they are stepping brothers........ And ? The thing with his family was let down and forgotten. What deal did he make with his father to protect his brother? Whyyyy. And I can't ship it. Idk if it is because they're stepping brothers or something different. The characters are chinese( I think). And it is so 'wrong' to be gay in China. But loving your step brother is even worse. If not the worst possible thing you could do to your family ( not my opinion, just a fact). And their family is pretty wealthy, so it is 10x worse. The fact that that doesn't matter at all, makes me kinda angry. I don't even know if they're together at the end ? It wasn't clear at all. And why... Why did the Mc and his friend broke contact after he quit his part time job.( or after he ditched him) I mean I thought you were freins? Why didn't they contact each other at all? It was like the author wanted to break the friendship to make the second couple canon. Like??? Idk. It was rollercoaster. The end kinda upset me too. It is a huge decision to be away from your lover for 2 years. But he told him that and he wasn't even feeling anything? He is upset, please. and what happened to his nomination? Did he won? Pls, I have so many questions. good thing the art style is so great and beautiful and that 3/4 of the story is super cute and sweet. Otherwise it would have been pretty trashy