Well, the preview is a tad bit confusing when you first read it but once you get to the first chapter everything gets cleared up right away. Everything is thrown out at the reader right away and just shows all this mans problem right away. for example, Nobody at his job likes him and right after scolding an employee underneath him he gets a call from his wife and she starts complaining about a small rip in the carpet and then his mistress, who is supposed to stay hidden decides to visit his workplace where their affair could be figured out. all this is shown within the first 10 pages of chapter 1. I feel as if those things could have at least been strung out to pull the readers intrest a lot more and have them guess the next thing that is going to happen instead of feeding everything to the audience. Now for the artwork. I like the artwork personally. You can tell that the illustrator put a lot of effort into the work without overdoing the panels and making it into a suffocating mess. The art is clean and organized. Overall I think this story should slow down a little and drag out the plot a little more and have the audience wait for a little before spooning everything to their readers, but that aside I will continue to read the story.
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