Lame fan me's manga / #marriage(3)

The beginning of this story was actually very cute. then after the story actually kept going they kept the plot very transparent. That this man got purposed to 17 years ago when he was 11 by a 3-year-old, old to be getting married to a woman later on and after two months of his marriage he was tired of the married and bumped into the person who purposed to him 17 years back only to realize that the younger man probably still has feelings for him. Overall I feel as if the plot will be steady but the story will get very messy as they try to figure out what they are going to do. But the artwork is on the cuter side not exactly a bubbly look, but it also maintains this typical manga look due to its lack of color.

Well, the preview is a tad bit confusing when you first read it but once you get to the first chapter everything gets cleared up right away. Everything is thrown out at the reader right away and just shows all this mans problem right away. for example, Nobody at his job likes him and right after scolding an employee underneath him he gets a call from his wife and she starts complaining about a small rip in the carpet and then his mistress, who is supposed to stay hidden decides to visit his workplace where their affair could be figured out. all this is shown within the first 10 pages of chapter 1. I feel as if those things could have at least been strung out to pull the readers intrest a lot more and have them guess the next thing that is going to happen instead of feeding everything to the audience. Now for the artwork. I like the artwork personally. You can tell that the illustrator put a lot of effort into the work without overdoing the panels and making it into a suffocating mess. The art is clean and organized. Overall I think this story should slow down a little and drag out the plot a little more and have the audience wait for a little before spooning everything to their readers, but that aside I will continue to read the story.

I kept reading this whole series! I did not want to put my phone down at all! It was suspenseful at all times, and kept me on the edge of my seat. The art was beautiful and very colorful and eye catching. BUT and a majorly big BUT, I absolutely hated how it ended, it was a good thing ending but some of the characters did not end up in places where majority of the audience would have been wanted them. Also some of the relationships within the story weren’t very consistent. For example the main male lead and his friend(???) after a certain chapter there was no sight of him until the last chapter where he was only mentioned. But overall it was a suspenseful story with very beautiful artwork and a decent plot.