Haewon's manga / #Writing(2)

It was good until I realized mc personality was never going back to aloof one they showed us for a split second ch 1, also there’s lots of logic errors like mc has time to get a suit fitted before confronting the kid situation and also he answers the phone but then forgets it at 2nd ml house?? 15: 2nd ML pissin me off 17: MC like if ur gonna sell urself j make urself my exclusive 21: WOW ML KISS MC FIRST?? 25: ah fuck MC why’d you say yes? It’s prob a slave contract 26: ML boutta go to MC’s “workplace” 27: is that food a good or a bad sign 35: eh, he’s too nice, I wanted him to be more like chill aloof no feels but he’s so fluff

19: his absolutely soulless face at the end is so good but sad but good