victor's manga / #Comedy(20)

ch 32 gonna let it marinate AND VINCR DIDNT RVEB FCUKING REMEBER HIM F UK U BRO. NO WONDER WHY PPL SAY MY BBYYY DESERVES BETTER FUCK U VINCE

LMFOA WHAT IS THISS

9.5 tbh, their relationship is so well done I REALLYYYYY LOVE HOW EMOTIONAL THEY BOTH ARE!! I CANT EVEN TELL WHOS TOP OR BOTTOM BECAUDE THEY DONT FOLLOW YHE STEROTYPICAL PERSONALITIES?? mcs coming out story has me DYING BRO, BRO IS GOIN THROUGH IT THE YUZU COOKIES BRO. AND THE WAY THEY WETE INTRODUCED 3 DIFF TIMES, IM CRYING MY EYES OIT. THE DRAMATIC CONFESSION, MY HEART STRINGS i really like the amount of personality each character has, even the sides one tbh. i also like how both sides of the their argument (esp mc) were talked through and they got through that together :,) sniffle. bro the chasing art is so well done, kudos to ml(?) for sticking up for himself and not trying to get hurt again. also love the sibling dynamic, the hairstylist brother and the gay supporting sister has me dead. dates when they’re actually dating and they just talk for hours is romance done right bro, it fr shows how well they connect T^T my love language fr. bro mc imagining and being sad about missing out on all those scenarios esp the school ones is so fucking real. bro mcs hornyness and inner dialogue is so relateable, also him slowly becoming more attached is super cute AAA THE PROPER FOREPLAY AND LUBE!! WE LOVE TO SEE IT!! like although the plot isn’t super unique as it’s a slice of life, it’s so well paced and well written??? like nothing is rushed and it flows so easily it’s such a nice and relaxing read (i say that as i scream into my pillow) def the kind of story i wish i could read for the first time again >_< i also enjoy having a top pov, i think this is actually the first time i’ve read one and it’s really well done. bro i swear this story is yaoi done right, the top giving deepthroat?? so fucking rare we love to see the feminine gender roles be abolished ! like if ur gonna make a gay couple make them be mlm bro!! i also like how they waited to smash until s2, idk it’s just nice to see couples that don’t fuck right away, also s2 is rlly well done, it’s usually a hit or miss in some manhwas so it’s nice to see. also the whole jealousy arc, it’s usually my ick but the way mc is mad at jongha (? ion remember his name LOL speaking of him i do like how he’s not really inherently bad though, i mean i totally get wanting to have a gay friend he should’ve just backed off when told though) but he’s mad at him and not ml, it’s nice to see he trusts ml to not cheat, he just doesn’t want jonghas grubby hands on ml *giggles* ITS THE WAY MC ALWAYS SAYS I LIKE U AND WAITS FOR A REPLY FROM ML, MY LAWRDDDD THE UNSPOKEN REASSURANCE IS SO FUCKING CUTE. s2 is just little conflicts that may arise when relationships are established, super cute how they get over those obstacles together,,,, the pretty boy coworker u a real one, had mcs back since day 1! we wanna see yo gf!! (i thought bro was gay)

this story is pure fucking gold i cannot. probably one of the best i’ve ever read, the romance development w the revenge is so well written im screaming into my pillow. i like how mc is still sweet about serious topics like ml being an orphan, it’s really nice to see when they’re like that even in enemies to lovers. the whole mc saving mls life w the appendicitis thing was really cute too. so far im only 10 chaps in and it’s amazing so far, i can’t wait until they meet irl. ALSO THE GIFT GIVING MELTS MY HEARTTT ARGHH I LOVE E DATERS!!! THEM MEETING IRL AND BECOMING ROOMAGES HAS ME SCREAMING HOLYUU SHITTY!! i can’t wait until their mutual feelings starts to happen >_< eeeekk my meowies

MY FUCKING GAWWWWSSDD BRO IS CHRONICALLY HORNY WHY ARE U HARD IN LITERALLY EVERY CHAPTER ?? THIS HAS GOY TO BE A SATIRE BECAUSE THERES ABSOLUTELY NO WAY THIS IS MENAY TO BE GAKEN SERIOUSLY. BRO JUST ASKED HIS GRANDMA FOR PICKLES WHILE GIVING A HANDJOB IM SO DEADD it’s like an underdeveloped wattpad story even has all of the cliches like the ml coming to the rescue of the hopeless mc, be so fr right meow. also it doesn’t even explain how mc got preggers in the first place so ig i was confused they didn’t show any of that, and stuff is just so randomly not explained or is left out that im so confused because it doesn’t go into detail of aspects that would make the story any more unique than the traditional im in debt save me cliche, even all that and im still eating it up tho lawl. i feel like the translation team didn’t do a good job on this, considering this is the official tl the dialogue is so awkward. i do *kinda* like the ml tho, he’s really something. a green flag but a complete dumbass and not in a cute way. just a himbo but make him the top and a gangster

LMFAOO OTS THE WAY MC GOES ALONG W MLS SHENANIGANS the check scene was so funny, “aside the fact in the benefactor for ur account, money withdrawn will be taken from me” HELP. delusional isn’t the word for it but ml is truly something else, so silly. i’m really glad mc is okay with most of it because if he was totally against it i def wouldn’t like this story as much,, also one thing i rlly like about this story and tbh most manhua in general is the creativity of technology, like their expensive watches can receive texts and such, things like that dont show up often in manhwa unless its a supernatural, so i rlly love these components in a slice of life :3 im ngl its kinda the same thing over and over again, where ml exposes himself and then mc overthinks but is unintentionally reassured, but its also really cool to kinda learn more about their backstory and the little details that they never really talked about until ml is in character, it’s so heartwarming to see that ml falls in love w mc over and over again, no matter what persona >_< and the art is super pretty!! i love how they’re both known to be handsome and intimidating like hell yeah accurate art,, i’m loving the bl troupes lawl they’re so silly but fulfilling, the absolute love mc has for ml <333

bro their miscommunication like if ml just explained why he’s doing stuff literally ALL of it would be cleared, i get that’s his personality and it makes sense coming from his perspective but u got mc all confused, esp when ml confessed first. “that means i’m gay” JAW DROPPED !! bro it’s so rare for mls to actually admit that holy shitttt also i love the brothers dynamic “fuck off” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ picked up again after dropping it - 7/9/24 aa so so I think I’m a better understanding of why there there was miscommunication in the first place because juicy isn’t used to give affection and the concept of love in the first place I mean it’s not a topic that a lot of manhwas talk about especially gangster ones cause like to turn off your feelings when you’re in that line of work so it’s really interesting to see how the story approaches that concept because in any other gang story I’ve read it. Seems like the ML has his feelings put together and he’s calm collected so it is a first for me to read some thing where one of them used to it like the MC while the ML isn’t other than that. I love the comedy. I wouldn’t call them at least so far 100% green flag especially the ML got mad because he wouldn’t sleep with him so there is some aspects but then the LML is so caring and his own way maybe it’s because I feel for the MC I am the same way with overhearing to people who don’t want listen listen so I kind of feel for him especially when the ML at least in mind doesn’t seem to care also i really like the art progression!! i mean i really liked how it looked at the beginning but they look so refreshed in the recent chaps, esp ah juicy, he looks SO MUCH better w his hair down. i love seeing artists progression through their story cuz it fr shows the time and dedication unintentionally QQ THEYRE SO GOLDEN RETRIVEF AND BLACK CAT BUT REVERSED BRO TT mc is so yap yap and ml is so mhm mhm ———— aw fuck i’m crying bro. I HATE TIMESKIPS WHEN THE MC AND ML ARENT TOGETHER. ESP WHen one of them moves on. fuck my heart is being torn to pieces don’t do this to me. ur telling me that mc no longer works at the convenience store when that’s literally the title??? DNI. bro he grew up and graduated and actually works at a company now :(( NOT TO MENTION HE STARTED SMOKING???? SOBBING ON MY HANDS AND KNEESS. i’m so glad his brother woke up from his coma but fcuk man. lemme just see my babies be happy together :(SNIFFLES AND STARTS SOBBING. IM SO FUCKING GLAF THEY WORKED THROUGH THEIR ISSUES <3333 HEART HANDS FOR DAYS. i do really like how its more realistic in the way that ml is still opening up because it’s been hard for him to reveal his true self without being worried how mc will see him :,)) QQ but he’s doing it!! and they’re being so supportive of eachother! esp when mc starts working at the better company rahhhh lets goo!!! u worked so hard bro u deserve a good job and to be spoiled by ml :,) i really enjoy mcs brother too!! i’m so glad he wasn’t killed off or anything, lowk ship him and mls “brother” wink wonk.. same w mls “brother”, ml really went back for him and i’m so freaking happy he did that bro. finally freaking finally it feels like a weight is lifted off my shoulders because they’re finally all happy!! esp w mcs friends getting married?????? aaaa that’s so cute they stayed w eachother for all of those years. i really like this story a lot. just something about the way it’s written bro. the quotes are so iconic i’ve been taking ss for almost every single chap, some of them are def going in my “just like me fr” folder. seeing the art progress over time is really cool too!! i do like the warm tones and good heavens bro blushing looks like me when i exercise lawl. this story is so iconic and will forever hold a place in my heart. i do like how ml is only sweet to mc heh heh,, that being said i do like the fact that he didn’t want to become a gangster or wtv, he was practically forced into it. one thing i can say about him is that i really hope in future chaps he opens up more, both of them tbh,, i feel like we know sm about mc but that’s because we see it from his perspective and his thoughts, so im glad they’re working on communicating because it was def a need. and brooooooooooo YALL ALREADY K N O W i’m a sucker for parallel chaps, so seeing how mcs dream came true QQ they’re all sitting and havinf dinner w eachother <333 my precious bbs. MC KEEPING THE LIGHTER ALL THOSE YEARTS. MYGODDDDDDDD MY KNAWING AT MY HANDS. it’s just the little details bro, showing that he never truly let go, there was always feelings. :,)) im so FRAAKING GLAD THEYRE HAPPU also one more quick thing to add, i really like how the age gap wasn’t made as a weird thing, i mean ah juicy is iconic as fuck but there’s not any like,,, “grooming” vibes? that sometimes age gaps have. they were both grown adults and the most ml ever does is call him like- a kid- not in a weird way though. also his character development for mc HAHA “u don’t call a guy pretty, u call them handsome” 3 years later: “you look so pretty” MHM MHM. i’m really happy that mls bodyguard worker dude stuck around too!! i love seeing committed side characters, just something about them mannnn 7/12/24 - finally done :,) i loved them so much,, i love the detail that ah juicy isn’t able to smile like before due to what he went through but the fact he’s still able to just for mc QQ i’m wishing them nothing but happy days together in the future <333 also mcs brother and mls brother totally get together in the future idc if it’s not canon, everyone saw their chemistry heh heh,, dangerous convince store u we’re def a wild ride full of angst but so so iconic, i kinned mc so hard in s1 too, will be missed *heart hands* ill def be getting the physical copies

i really like that mc is weird, but not in a childish way or child like, he’s just different, but stands up for what he believes in, sm 2nd hand embarrassment but also laughing my ass off

8/13/23 3 07 am 3.5 star rating ganhhhh TT i should’ve listened to the comedy tag more and not the drama one because i really wished some of the more serious moments were taken well.. more seriously.. for example when ml found out his dad died, i mean that was 1/3 of the plot in itself,, there was a couple scenes that made up for it, like the parts where mls dad says, “it wasn’t that sihwa resembled si-in because he was crying. it was how his eyes were full of love” probably my favorite quote from this story <333 for mls dad to figure out despite not really understanding human emotions,, i wish we were at least able to see his grave though, i feel like it would’ve brought the closure that i was hoping for with that kind of plot. but yeah, same with mcs trauma w his family, im really really glad he stuck up for his mom in the sense of not letting his dad find her along w not revealing his identity when he saw her, but man. like it was depicted that he was spiraling but just like, no one cared? i wish there was more comfort TT im really glad his father ended up leaving and ive never seen a detail of showing that the father has his own people to rely on, it does kinda give some sort of closure on his own part, even if i still fucking hate him. the part where he packs up and leaves because of the burning money bonfire (love how they actually just donated it) was such a smart and good plan to truly show that he was only there for mc for his money. i adored the side couple though, they’re prolly my favs in this story <33 esp the fact that the little guy and the blonde alien were actually able to go to alphaian or wtv togethrr!! like imagine having ur special interests come true that’s so cool! they get along so well that’s so cute, i loved the part of the little guy being conveniently rich too ahaha. other than that, id say the story is like a solid 4/10, i was just expecting so much more esp w how unique of a plot it is, but no it was just filled with smut, not mindless smut because they actually had conversations but i guess it wasn’t really romantic at all? like they never said i love you once during this story QQ gimmie my happy ending u mfs. the comedy was decent though, i got a few good chuckles esp w the little bunny tentacle monster thing, tbh the best part. *thumbs up* that’s all i gotta say for this one (quick side note as well, i’m not a fan of alien extraterrestrial stuff either, so this one was good for not exploring that too much)