Hmmm... 3☆: one for the art, one for the end, one for the good smut.
Honestly, apart from that, everything was a problem to me.
I didn't like the uke, I hate threesomes with brothers in (specially twins) and I didn't like the 《twin bf》 either.
They were both pretty annoying to me.
For the second story, it was WAY better, but the chapter where the seme just let the uke piss himself, just like that, on the streets.... ew. Disgusting.
He's lucky his bf just told him he was a pervert. I would've slapped him damn hard
sefure ijou, koibito miman!