Eldrane's manga / #want more!!!(312)

The ending was decent enough. The only reason why I rated it 4 stars is because the plot was both cringe and generic. I wished it was a bit more realistic. Aside from that, the meaning behind this webtoon was both deep and impactful.

This was too fucking sweet!!

This was honestly funny! The only thing that I felt like needed improvement was the transition from the seme’s old behavior to his “new” behavior. In my opinion, it didn’t feel as natural as it could have and almost feels as though it was forced in a sensed.