Eldrane's manga / #smut(266)

Cocoon of the Heart

Complete | RosyStarling | 2000 released

The ending was decent enough. The only reason why I rated it 4 stars is because the plot was both cringe and generic. I wished it was a bit more realistic. Aside from that, the meaning behind this webtoon was both deep and impactful.

Dekoboko Sugar Days

Complete | Atsuko Yusen | 2000 released

This was honestly funny! The only thing that I felt like needed improvement was the transition from the seme’s old behavior to his “new” behavior. In my opinion, it didn’t feel as natural as it could have and almost feels as though it was forced in a sensed.