Eldrane's manga / #slice of life(322)

I liked this! This was actually cute

I love this!!! This was so cute The story was great, and so was the romance. I only wished it had more sex. Aside from that, it’s definitely a favorite and 10/10.

Ngl, this story was a hot ass mess Don’t get me wrong, the characters are sexy af. It’s just the story. The romance basically isn’t there and it doesn’t feel natural. I tried to give it a chance, but I couldn’t connect to it. It was definitely missing more of that romance element. Even though the sex was great, it’s not enough to carry on its own. On top of that, I felt like there wasn’t enough back story to the seme as well. Overall this story is weird in general and it could’ve been better.