Eldrane's manga / #sexy(255)

This was honestly funny! The only thing that I felt like needed improvement was the transition from the seme’s old behavior to his “new” behavior. In my opinion, it didn’t feel as natural as it could have and almost feels as though it was forced in a sensed.

The Uke was such a mood!!! He was so relatable. Every time I saw him I saw myself It made me so sad when his anxiety came out because it reminded me of myself so much. This story was everything! I already knew the seme had alterior motives, but he was just so nice and hot like can u plz be with me! The romance and comedy were both there. I wished there was more!! 10/10

I honestly finished reading this just to finish reading it. There were many moments when my intelligence was insulted, and I felt like the story was pretty cliche. The sex was censored from the translation, but it at least still had romance. I also would have loved to see more from the side couple. I felt like the author led with more drama rather than romance and it felt low key dragged out. All in all, it was an ok read, but I wouldn’t reread it again.

Because this was a translation, the wording was a bit off for me personally which made it harder to connect to the story. In addition, I felt as though there should’ve been more romance in general. Aside from that, the story was fine for the most part.