Eldrane's manga / #Romance(353)

Ngl, this story was a hot ass mess Don’t get me wrong, the characters are sexy af. It’s just the story. The romance basically isn’t there and it doesn’t feel natural. I tried to give it a chance, but I couldn’t connect to it. It was definitely missing more of that romance element. Even though the sex was great, it’s not enough to carry on its own. On top of that, I felt like there wasn’t enough back story to the seme as well. Overall this story is weird in general and it could’ve been better.

This was OK I guess. The story line was kind of cringy along with the foreplay talk. The misunderstanding was forced and there wasn’t a smooth transition of feelings between the uke and seme. The sex was good, but that’s probably it It wasn’t a terrible read, it just could’ve been better.