Eldrane's manga / #Could’ve been better(21)

The ending felt anticlimactic and I which there was more romance.

I like it a lot! I wished they showed more of their relationship.

I wished the story focused more on the romance, but it was good overall.

I felt like there should have been more romance if anything aside from the BDSM.

I felt like the story was lackluster to me. I wished the writer wrote the love story better.

This honestly went kind of fast. I felt like the writer was trying to include a lot of elements into one story, but none of them really stood out aside from the romance. I don’t have much to say aside from the fact that there should’ve been more romance, yakuza, and omegaverse elements. It just felt a bit incomplete, like something’s missing. It was still a good read overall with a nice ending. Wished there was more.

The story feels incomplete and I wish there was more

I only read the first story. I liked it. I just wished it was longer. Also, I kind of thought that it was extreme the way the uke chose to deal with his trauma.

Ngl, this story was a hot ass mess Don’t get me wrong, the characters are sexy af. It’s just the story. The romance basically isn’t there and it doesn’t feel natural. I tried to give it a chance, but I couldn’t connect to it. It was definitely missing more of that romance element. Even though the sex was great, it’s not enough to carry on its own. On top of that, I felt like there wasn’t enough back story to the seme as well. Overall this story is weird in general and it could’ve been better.

This was OK I guess. The story line was kind of cringy along with the foreplay talk. The misunderstanding was forced and there wasn’t a smooth transition of feelings between the uke and seme. The sex was good, but that’s probably it It wasn’t a terrible read, it just could’ve been better.