aerslevdi's manga / #cute(2304)

Absolutely loved Mongryong. I did feel like Jeha was lacking though. I wanted him to go scorched earth with his family and Nakyung. That part felt a little too rushed and in the end he didn't quite do anything with his father.

I liked it but it seems like most story from Renta suffer from the same issue of having an abrupt ending. For silly stories with no much character development and only for the smexy that is not a problem, but I needed at least an extra of I don't know, just something to cement them as a couple (and maybe a spin-off on the other guys?). Anyway, it has the same "shocking" style of name as most stories on Renta and it feels like it the ending is almost there just not quite yet it's completed.

Lovely and while I HATE the Mafia guy, I wouldn't mind a spin off given I've loved this mangaka's stories

I don't understand why so many people hating on the brother when he was the one pushing Yuzuru to go out and have a life and the one who scolded their mother for treating Yuzuru that way. To me he was the MVP here

I didn't feel like it was rushed as I've seen in other comments. I did feel like the ending would have benefited from another chapter that could make the couple make more solid. But given the overall feeling of the story it wasn't bad either to leave a feeling of beginning.

The story is lovely. It's one of those rare ones were I liked both MCs. I liked that while Yul had given up on his freedom and life, he wasn't converted to a doormat. He had strength and he never wavered when he got someone's (Luan) full support. I also loved Luan for his tenderness towards Yul as well as his respect of his boundaries and decisions. If have to criticize one thing, it would be the one thing I always hate about Manhwas. The villain NEVER gets what they should be getting. They always seem to be left off easily. There's no real aftermath and we don't really see a correction of wrongdoings. For example, we never see Yul taking ownership of the songs Jisun stole nor the plagiarism rumours being dispelled. We don't see him fully claiming back his life. Just a glimpse of him wanting to move forward in his career, but not a correction of what he was stolen. I was also a bit disappointed on Luan's siblings. Their side story was interesting but it also displayed how selfish they still were. They didn't care at all about Luan even if the show Taeha going after him to Hong Kong and the brother feeling repentant for getting him kicked out. All of that felt empty when they didn't kept dismissing his feelings for his own mother. The art wasn't bad, but usually you'd expect it to get better not worse. Character's in their latest 20's - early 30's were looking like highschoolers. I think the worst was Yul who due to his small size ended up looking like a child even though Luan wasn't the typically buff giant seme that makes everyone look small.

I don't know if it was supposed to be like that or if the chapters were cut but some of them felt short and like there was no continuity on where they left off. Other than that the stories are really sweet and fluffy. I would have liked a spin off on the friend from the first story though

I really liked the story. I was scared that it will fall into cliche/toxic territory a few times but it avoided it nicely and it gave it a refreshing touch. I was sad for the friejd in love with the director but I was glad that he was just to show you how the director was in love with Hee Tae rather than introducing some bitchy antagonist. Likewise with Hee Tae's backstory. It was good as a backstory, but it was also good that it stayed in the past and that the ex didn't appear to create unnecessary drama and that he decided to move past it for the sake of a future with the director. And the respect both of them had for each other was top notch. I think the story had a good end as it told what it wanted to tell. I would have liked one more episode as the last one seemed packed with a lot of things and it could have been made into 2, but the end with Hee Tae saying he was happy was appropriate. If I would pick on something is that I wanted to know more about the secondary couple.