Jack Jack's manga / #Longer(25)

some chapters are incomplet, that sucks the story feels rushed, characters are under developed. sex scenes are boring and art kinda ugky The story kinda sucked, had a bad ending ending up in abuse wwith

PLEASE UPDATE THIS I AM UGHHHH ch.22/23 - what the fuck CARL?! YOU WANT ETHAN TO RAPE GREY INORDER TO SAVE HIM?? Like yes Grey wants to have sex with him but he is still very much unconsious and can't consent. Which thankfully Ethan recognise, and then throws out the window. WHAT THE FUCK I THOUGH THIS WOULD BE CUTE WHOLESOME STUFF NOT THIS!!!

I mean not a cute sm story but a cute story non the less. I wish we got more of a sm dynamic and more of the collar... But whatever. Hot sex non the less

Nah man, chip cheating fucking threw me. Why the fuck are u complaining then, just fucking break up! Thought this might've been a lite of an asexual spin put nope. Also the ending was hella undeserved like the fairygodmother yeah sure dude

okay we are doing the obligatory 4 ch. i dont think i am feeling this, the art is nit my style and the mis are kinda uglay

very cute

this looks really cute

ch.36 - i am giving up. sure are cute couple but the stroy are dragging and aint entertaining