abacate's manga / #twisted(6)

I really liked the plot, some really fucked up shit happened, but that's the point of the manga. But there were some things that could be better written such as passage of time, the time skip to when the new salon was constructed was a little confusing, and the uke's opinion on his relationship with the seme, after finding out the truth, bc he suddenly just wasn't clueless anymore after the time skip. Also, the writer could have gone deeper on the whole "It's dirty" idea that came up all the time and was neve explained.

This is just honestly fucked up

Veggies I a fundanshi with a Chanel where he post pictures and videos of BL situations at his school. One day he receives a message from anonymous saying that he is a fan and wants to meet him in the science room, but to his surprise there he sees the most popular guy at school serizawa and a underclassman ukyo having sex, but it seems super abusive on seriawa's side. -Like for real this is super good lol yes serizawa was shit, he had a reason for being shit and the other guy understood and accepted instead of talking it out which sucks but if it didn't happen the manga also wouldn't happen so... my critique is that I needed some development for vegge and the blond guy, also needed a peek at his face and to see a healthy side to the other couple

I really don't know how I feel about it lol their feelings were left too out in the open so I really didn't get how they ended it with and idk I liked mine, he was super duper. And the relationship felt super forced on mine "if you don't do this I'll leave", bitch shut up you even forced yourself on him later on

Pretty good if I may say so, super interesting

This shit dark lol