Himy's manga / #unrequited love(345)

It was so pure and adorable. I was giggling the whole time kusakabe is so handsome and loving and sajo is so adorable and sexy love them so much. Now i am on my way to read the sequels!

I love the mystery and suspense that this story took us through. The 2 characters being so passionately in love was also adorable to see. I wish some parts of the story could have been more elaborate or thought through tho, for example, why the heck was the discovery of what happened with the jewel so anticlimactic??The ending was SO rushed, this story could’ve been way deeper but it was still a fun read, I also feel so bad for ray I know he’s only an alter but still… ily ray the most. He deserved more!!!

honestly, i don't even understand why I liked this story when I first read this... probably because I was still young back then but now that I've reread this— wow the story is so good at giving me second-hand embarrassments LMAO like Yuuto sit yo ass down, for God's sake ur embarrassing me and like that one comment said: Yuuto was just experiencing heartbreak while Ryuu just fucks around like a whore... yeah, this is pure torture

i love Fuji, hes soo cute. i think he deserves a better story than this one...

Loved the plot twist ngl but knowing what I know now, I do kinda feel bad for jihoon getting kicked in the face and called poor. It was soo cute though!!!! I want morr!!!

A+ story execution and art! Nagato is a green flag for sure and I'm so happy they ended up happy together! Poor Ai went through it and he deserves peace and happiness now I wish i could break the d*ck of all the a**hole that hurt Ai and stick it in their mouth until they choke to death, while a bat is plunged in their butt. (╬￣皿￣)凸Nagato and ai were sooo cute!!!! For the second story I have 2 things to say -"once a cheater, always a cheater" and "what a hypocrite the same is"

I kinda thought that Chihaya and Satsuki will end up together hehe but I also want Ushio for Satsuki but it will be a great plot if Chihaya and Satsuki end up together aaaAaarghhh I don't know anymoreee. But i really loved all the stories!!!

It was sooo gooddd. I love beni so much she is such a badass girl and i love how she beats shitbout of ao to get him straight. I loved both stories. I wish the last one was a full fleged story, would've loved to see the seme falling in love gradually and desperately chasing after the uke lol

I'm disappointed in Taichi. I understand that he was probably sad that Ai didn't directly divulge that bit of news to him because they're bffs BUT that didn't give him the right to hurt him on purpose. You know what's disgusting, your behavior Taichi I NEED an update for this sooooooo bad. Taichi better fucking apologize and fix their friendship and I just want more lovey dovey Nagato and Ai

It's just not the best writing tbh. I feel like if you want to make a story like this in six chapters, you really have to make your scenes count. Personally I think this would have benefited from more, but shorter scenes for the sake of the story. Longer scenes to convey a certain mood are great when you have a long time to tell the story, but in a shorter one it's going to take away from the things that really matter. So the problem isn't that this was too fast. It's in fact really slow for its format and feels disjointed because of that. And actually it should have been more fast paced, just with more story fit into those six chapters. Or it should have been a long form comic. As it is, we don't get enough story to explain the main character's choices and feelings in my opinion. If Dawn was unhappy enough to escape to Hames' place, why was he so willing to go back immediately, for an instance? I also feel like Dawn falling in love with Hames came a bit out of nowhere too. Additionally, while I can guess Dawn was conditioned not to question things, I wish we'd gotten more reasoning behind him not daring to talk to Hames about his parents. It feels so off that after 12 long years neither of them talk to each other. I can sort of get Hames more, because he thinks Dawn actually got to read the entire letter, but even so... why isn't he curious about the 12 years that passed? It's not that I think their actions are impossible, it's just that they lack substance and reasoning. Some of it you can read between the lines, but not enough. Also we don't get to see why Dawn was saved from the fire? Was it Hames that saved him? And in that case, why was he even there? Or was it just some rando saving him and then Hames was just there when he woke up? There were also some style inconsistencies I feel were a poor choice; this was supposedly a very heavy and serious comic based on the concept and colours, so it's pretty jarring when chibis and heart effects suddenly appear during the last sex scene. It makes it harder for me to take it seriously, and because the sillyness of those things doesn't fit with the rest of the comic, it makes it feel... cheap. But with all of that said, most of the scenes themselves are great. The first scene with Hames coming over with the letter and the maid burning it is really well made for an instance. It's just that there should have been more substance, really. And the face off with delterm was anticlimatic