Himanshi's manga / #Romance(832)

It's just not the best writing tbh. I feel like if you want to make a story like this in six chapters, you really have to make your scenes count. Personally I think this would have benefited from more, but shorter scenes for the sake of the story. Longer scenes to convey a certain mood are great when you have a long time to tell the story, but in a shorter one it's going to take away from the things that really matter. So the problem isn't that this was too fast. It's in fact really slow for its format and feels disjointed because of that. And actually it should have been more fast paced, just with more story fit into those six chapters. Or it should have been a long form comic. As it is, we don't get enough story to explain the main character's choices and feelings in my opinion. If Dawn was unhappy enough to escape to Hames' place, why was he so willing to go back immediately, for an instance? I also feel like Dawn falling in love with Hames came a bit out of nowhere too. Additionally, while I can guess Dawn was conditioned not to question things, I wish we'd gotten more reasoning behind him not daring to talk to Hames about his parents. It feels so off that after 12 long years neither of them talk to each other. I can sort of get Hames more, because he thinks Dawn actually got to read the entire letter, but even so... why isn't he curious about the 12 years that passed? It's not that I think their actions are impossible, it's just that they lack substance and reasoning. Some of it you can read between the lines, but not enough. Also we don't get to see why Dawn was saved from the fire? Was it Hames that saved him? And in that case, why was he even there? Or was it just some rando saving him and then Hames was just there when he woke up? There were also some style inconsistencies I feel were a poor choice; this was supposedly a very heavy and serious comic based on the concept and colours, so it's pretty jarring when chibis and heart effects suddenly appear during the last sex scene. It makes it harder for me to take it seriously, and because the sillyness of those things doesn't fit with the rest of the comic, it makes it feel... cheap. But with all of that said, most of the scenes themselves are great. The first scene with Hames coming over with the letter and the maid burning it is really well made for an instance. It's just that there should have been more substance, really. And the face off with delterm was anticlimatic

I’m obsessed can’t wait for more I fell in love so quick and tell me why they did to ughh I love it can’t wait for more (≧∀≦) (=・ω・=) Tyler is to die forrrrr this was amazing tho and the princess treatment and the last episode beach scene ughh loveeeeee

Chapter 3 the fathers of the main characters their story was very saddening and I didn’t quite liked the end of it but if things didn’t go into this order their kids wouldn’t grow up … idk I liked it thought but wanted to know what and who was the girl with the tails and ears that appeared in the parents story

I'm glad I found this Manhwa, very wholesome! ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~ I love how I laugh and Giggles while reading this (▰˘◡˘▰). They were so cringe when they were in love but i kept laughingg. This was really cute and funny.I freaking loved this story, it was simple sweet and there was actual communication! And i need junseo and dojin to have their separate bLs they are so handsome! All of their friends were really good looking! I loved how muhyeok was such a fool in love and naui turned into a big softie in love as well! Enjoyed this story soo much

I'm having mixed feelings. It was quite sweet and good but u know ML approached MC just because he smelled like his dead husband, ig MC will be the substitute for choi eugene. Also Honestly, I thought the content of the envelope was an ultrasound photo but I guess an acceptance letter is better. I mean everything screams "IT'S NEVER TOO LATE" never to late to find love and dream.

I always like a gray/silver haired characters, but this one, this one is really... That gray/silver haired character, he's nasty personality pissed me so much that I don't even have a time to appreciate he's appearance, remembering he's name is not even worth it Aside from he's dumb (in terms of love) he knows that the talisman is really important to the mc but because he's "jealousy" he almost fck up a relationship and a life of someone (╯°Д °)╯╧╧. Other then that it was so cute and funny. I kept giggling the whole time bwhahahahahah

i feel like 10 years have been added to my lifespan god bless the author's dad for not wearing a condom. I loved it so much. Mr. Seo was such an adorable side character!! It was so funny when drunk iro tore his shirt open bwhahahha. I loved Iro he was adorable affff not a single moment went by when i didnt think how cute and fluffy this manhwa is. I loved their couple so much!! They were so much in love such a healthy relationshipp ahhh. Also mr choi is so me. I loved how big of a fudanshi he is and how he kept supporting iro throughout the manhwa. Also the lesbian club owner was so hot. Can she date meThis was HEALTHY. This was GOALS. This is what the GREEN FLAGS are made of. They both are funny, they both have their own fears and anxieties and work together to get over them. Their sex is amazing bc they have a balanced dynamic. They're adults adulting like fucking normal people and I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THAT. NOTHING BAD HAPPENS HERE. No third party, no rapey side characters, no suspicious nor psychopathic people butting in. No one bothers them and their happiness.

This is actually pretty well written, I didn't think they'd respect his boundaries and heck even establish some between them and talk it out, thank god it didn't take a weird incesty turnIt's so cruel to have a hot pair of twin semes and just 1 chapter of smut like cmon now

I didn't like their beginning and how rushed the "love" is, and how there's no reason for us to believe they even like each other besides the horniness they feel,, until the lion guy says he's in love and like. no. first off, you were in love with his image and performance, and we never get to actually see much more than that. AND IT'S A FUCKING SHAME. cause the setting is interesting, the characters are interesting and GORGEUS LIKE DAMN and they're actually fucking adorable after they get together (and a tiny bit before that). the fact that you only needed to change a few things and add some others to make this story actually amazing, bothers me the most. for example, their first time together, instead of making the lion dude do what he does, make yoru take the first steps to satisfy the costumer and show how it bothers the lion dude but it also pains him that he just can't make the other stop etc. and after that we ACTUALLY see them learn more about each other outside of sex. instead of that we get a I'll fuck you roughly constantly and then tell you it was all because I love you oh so very much. be for real. oh but he's so kind. WHERE. don't just tell us that, show it. if he's so kind, why are the dudes from the beginning still in hell (was the newspaper about them? I've no idea). why does he force yoru constantly. but also, why are the servants saying that? what happened with them for them to believe that? SHOW US. and if it's supposed to be more in shadow, at least tease it more. also,, just a side thing but, does he dance with or without music?? I don't even know how many stars to give it, but I'll put probably one more than it should because the extras (especially the orange one) are adorable,, and the art and characters are divine. the fact that you can see how much the author likes these characters and this is the result,, the little notes on some of the drawings about the characters were more interesting than the whole story, I'm sorry.

It’s something about these vampire BL’s that are just so fucking good to me even though this one feels a lil incomplete it still was really good, leaving me wanting more! Great job author. This couple was so freaking cute! Also, the end was so heartwarming. I loved when yo/haru said to aki-San that he loved that aki-San comes home to him after fighting and only thinks about him and then aki-San told yo/haru that once he becomes a full vampire that yo can drink his blood because he doesn’t want anyone else tasting on yo and yo tasting on anyone else besides him. UGHHHHHHHH IM JUST SO IN LOVE WITH THIS ONE!