After I Left You
Read: Ch.26 Rating for this one is too high. The art is really nice and it’s not bad in general (especially from ~Ch.10), but the first few chapters will make your blood boil and wish for seme‘s death. So yeah, don‘t re-read this. Seme is just a jerk, nothing more. I‘d love to see that uke will never come back, but get together with 2nd seme/doctor. But we all know he‘ll get back together with OG seme, after he „changes“. That‘s bullshit, if he only ignored uke for his business, it wouldn‘t be too hard forgiving him. But he‘s blaming uke for apparently throwing a tantrum, after getting into an accident and losing eyesight because of that other bitch. Never forget? Yes, but also never forgive this jerk and take that great doctor, who‘s caring and handsome. Seme did a lot of groveling and apologizing, also trying to help uke afterwards, but I don‘t like his forceful way of doing things and not asking uke for his opinion. Even though it‘s a miracle that seme did a complete 180*, it‘s ok for uke to forgive him, since he‘s still so in love with him. But I‘d have loved to see way more groveling, that was almost nothing for me, meh. And what‘s up with the bitch villain‘s punishment? The ending isn‘t fast-paced and everyone got their punishments, but it‘s kinda unsatisfying. The villain‘s father punishing him and being harsh to him in the future? Yeah sure, who‘s gonna believe that shit! But since they don‘t have any evidence for court, that‘s the best they could get out of this, so it‘s ok, I guess.. The story should have been like this: - Seme grovels and apologizes - uke accepts his apology, but can‘t forget, how aweful seme was to him - then uke slowly falls in love with 2nd seme aka doctor, who decides to stay for uke - and finally the downfall of the bitch uke, where it all goes public with evidence of his confession - then follows the shitstorm, where bitch uke has to publicly apologize and pay money to uke, before being sent away just like in the original That‘s the summary of the story I wanna read, not all this drama for nothing in the end.
Hoshi to Harinezumi