Motoyan no Atashi ga Hana Ijitteru Yasao ni Mout Torarerunante
Read: Ch.5 It‘s cute and funny, but really cliché and they fall for each other a bit too quick. MC just quit her job and does that whole make-over with „lady-like“ classes, but what about trying to find a job she really likes instead of just roaming around taking classes she’s clearly not too into? Also, why can’t ML refuse all that touching, even if they’re his paying students? That‘s already sexual harassment and just makes him into a playboy, especially when he‘s telling MC that her jealousy is misplaced. Wth dude, that‘s your gf and not some stranger. The author tried to make ML an obsessive one with the GPS tracking app etc., but him letting those girls all over him, that‘s just him being a fucking hypocrite. They‘re both former delinquents and like each other, but all that sudden change of MC was pretty forced by other ppl‘s opinions and not her own idea of wanting to truly change oneself, even though that‘s what she tries to convince herself of. And what about those shitty friends? Even if they were good friends before, they haven‘t been in contact, which is fine, since that just happens after graduation sometimes, but they‘re already pretty judgemental and talking shit like that‘s the only was for a „girl‘s‘ happiness or what? Just let her choose herself without all those dumb remarks. It‘s like MC is just trying to fit in all those societal stereotypes, but doesn‘t go after what she truly wants herself. The only legitimate reason she’s not the worst MC is, if we consider ML’s ass as her one true goal. Changing for that goodness is understandable haha Sweet and comedic story, but there are too many flaws in the characters and the plot itself.
Hana to Sumi