chcz's manga / #single parent(2)

spoilers for first/main story: So...I’m still stuck on the fact that this seme is crazy. I wad a bit pissed when he called the uke whore and honestly concerned/pissed when his knife play. I enjoy a good BDS&M relationship, but the uke just seemed terrified. Their relationship seemed poorly written. The uke expressed uncertainty in the relationship b/c he feels inferior (and why not, b/c like slot of yaoi this relationship started with questionable sexual assault/ dubious consent ) and the seme goes crazy and starts to talk about cutting up his partner as punishment??? B/c HE feels hurt that the uke is feeling inferior??? would be alright it was clear that he was faking being a nice guy and caring father,but his actions made him seem like he had a split personality. One that the uke should be wary of, but isn’t . Overall, left the story feeling incomplete. also, was not prepared for the darkness of the side stories. when pair with the main story, it makes mores sense.

The plot and character development was superb for a yaoi manga. I could really understand wheat the characters were thinking.