chcz's manga / #Kid fic(84)

This started off as just a cute, kinda silly mpreg story, but the last few chapters got REAL. I actually really like how to author hinted at future relationship problems in the beginning, let us sail into married life, and then started to deal with the reality of being married - having a possessive partner, going back to school after having a kid...I also love Jiwon the best friend.

spoilers for first/main story: So...I’m still stuck on the fact that this seme is crazy. I wad a bit pissed when he called the uke whore and honestly concerned/pissed when his knife play. I enjoy a good BDS&M relationship, but the uke just seemed terrified. Their relationship seemed poorly written. The uke expressed uncertainty in the relationship b/c he feels inferior (and why not, b/c like slot of yaoi this relationship started with questionable sexual assault/ dubious consent ) and the seme goes crazy and starts to talk about cutting up his partner as punishment??? B/c HE feels hurt that the uke is feeling inferior??? would be alright it was clear that he was faking being a nice guy and caring father,but his actions made him seem like he had a split personality. One that the uke should be wary of, but isn’t . Overall, left the story feeling incomplete. also, was not prepared for the darkness of the side stories. when pair with the main story, it makes mores sense.

One of my favorite mangas. I love how the kid bring them together.

This manga was a perfect mix of fluff, hope, and grief (without overwhelming the sweet plot). The ending was wonderful, I wish we got to see the couple spend some more time by themselves, but tans is so cute. The artwork was so good! Especially how subtle the emotions were on Mirouno’s face in the first few chapters. It was so clear to me that he was already in love with Yutaka, but it wasn’t overwhelming. Dad was also a wonderful character! . . . I cried so much when Yutaka asks otousan about how he overcame the loss of his wife and the dad says that he didn’t, rather the pain is proof that he loves his wife so he is happy to experience it. so beautiful and sad! I didn’t expect the story line to get so deep! What make me really admire Yutaka (who honestly can be seen as a weak character somet8mea) is that hearing the dad’s advice made him decide to hold onto what he has now and move in with the family. I was so proud!

First story was super cute! Didn’t care for the second one. But then again.i came here for fluffy gay guys and babies.

Ch 3

I would read SO much more of these guys.