Youngchunie's manga / #Completed(11)

I wish this was longer but rest in peace to the author.. This was a great read, my two favorite genre (yaoi and fantasy) in one story. It's a bit sad because I think the author is supposed to be writing this longer but more focusing on the story like what will happen now that became an S-rank after he awakened from being a proto-hunter and there was this thing that's stopping him from awakening, saying that it was dangerous for him if he allowed the access to the system. I'm dying of curiosity as to what it is.

Kinda wishing more Karyan x Jerry moments but since the beginning it was already carved to the stone that Ilya is the end game (it was obvious). One of the first manhwa that I knew where its transmigration of a boy in a capture game, it had always been girls. I'll check if this have novel, I'm interested to see if it had more moments they didn't added in the manhwa adaptation. There are plotholes and the ending was kinda rushed, I was a bit surprised to see that it says its the last episode. There were parts that doesnt make sense and wasn't explained why is that. Like who is the one that controls the system (it was kinda implied there is someone), and why did that fortune teller bite the magic stone (for what is her purpose?), and they said after the ending, jerry will go back to his original world, and what happened to Karyan then when he chose the Ilya route? I needed to know more. Anyways, overall, cute story despite the plotholes.