neonpoop's manga / #Smut(6)

Now I like the concept to this and I loved this character in the other story, but I just didn't get into this. i think one of the things I didn't get into was how immature and slutty he was... like, I kinda had an expectation for his character in the last manga and this character was just too immature for what I had imagined. I'm sick of the very long past chapters, I much rather his present day character and would rather read HIS story that his past self. I think (read: know) that I wouldn't be so cranky if the dad didn't sleep with him. Like how freaking dare you betray your wife and child like that... you're too handsome for me to hate you like this. I think this is a good story, it's very interesting, and I love the other works by this author. However, this just didn't go the way I wanted it to go so it's just not for me.

For a story called “Make Me Bark” there’s surprisingly little pet play involved