Yuzo's manga / #supernatural(53)

The game he’s been playing for 11 years becomes reality when he wakes up the day after completeing it. He’s currently fighting a minotaur in a shape shifting tower.

I’d love to give this 5 stars because the pacing and originality is amazing but too many things have added up that’ve made me have to skip scenes. The romance is horrible. I swear romance ruins everything. The main character is a low key psychopath because even those who experience war feel something about taking anothers life and needs some humanity added to his character more than just “he loves his family.” There’s hella inconsistencies that rereading a few years later all at once has made painfully obvious. It makes sense because it’s been six years and the author probably didnt plan everything out from the beginning but there are so many and at least trying to make them make sense would’ve helped a bit. The artist being screwed over makes me absolutely pissed. I’m hoping the author did the conti or whatever it’s called cause the pacing is what makes this book so good and if that disappears and the romance stays id have to drop it. Pisses me off that the author forgot common sense for a bit and added romance. I swear there are a million more ways to add character development emotionally and authors forget that. Other than those things Tbate is really good