Yuzo's manga / #smut(387)

meh.. could've been good but like... why is the kid there? I love stories with kids in them but this one it was entirely unnecessary and felt unnatural. Also subverse stuff is like... why is the sub more feminine and young looking than the dom always? it just seems like a weird pull from omegaverse just to push heteronormative stereotypes at least in omegaverse it kinda makes sense cause they have fucking WOMBS. but subverse? what??

the sex makes it kind of trashy otherwise it'd be a really interesting story if written better

i honestly would love this more if it was less about the relationship more about the superpower cause it was a really cool idea that was sidelined for gay sex

there was SO MUCH POTENTIAL. The characters where hot, their personalities could be built on to be unique and human-like, their jobs were really interesting and backstories... there was so much potential. If the author just spent a little more time fleshing it out it could've been amazing but the traumatizing the love interest thing makes me think that if they did flesh he story out more they'd make it worse. I'm so disappointed.

a bunch of troupes jumbled together with zero original ideas added