Effy's manga / #smut(46)

I LOVE this story and the art that goes with it. The romance story itself is also so wholesome and deep. It's genuinely on some Notebook-type level. My heart has exploded a million times over. ️️️️ SMUUUUTTTT, SO MUCH SMUTTTTT ️️️️ The smut aspect is written and illustrated so so well. It's far from boring and it's made incredibly rich by consistently changing the elements up each time or having new ones added. Not to mention there's a whole lot of it, the writer spoiled us. I also really like that while one character is more the 'masculine' one (or the top lol), it's just a tiny bit more and it's mainly only noticeable when they're intimate. Other than that, the characters are both pretty balanced between their feminine/masculine qualities, something that I LOVE to see since LGBTQ relationships are often depicted with one being dominantly feminine one and the other being dominantly masculine. My 2 qualms: RANDOM SEXUAL ASSAULT WRITTEN IN?! The romance between the main characters is morally sound, nearly healthily perfect, and develops from their emotional and physical bond with each other. Neither character is actually a stalker or any sort of sexually perverse criminal. Their love is genuine and the stalker bit is just a joke between them due to the story of their meeting. So WHY TF DID THE AUTHOR MAKE ONE OF THEM SA THE OTHER DURING THEIR FIRST ENCOUNTER?!!!!! IT IS SOOOO OUT OF PLACE AND DOESNT ADD TO, OR FIT, THE TONE OF THE STORY OR THE PLOT WHATSOEVER. It's completely misaligned with who the characters are, what their relationship is like, and it just never brought up again (again, PROBABLY BECAUSE ITS COMPLETELY OUT OF LINE WITH STORY).

I…I am speechless… I can’t believe the people who rated this less than 5 stars because this is the absolute best I have ever read. I can’t even put it into words.

Honestly, the potential was all there, but it was so so short. There’s no character development really, instead it feels like an abrupt change, even with Takayuki since the way he’s described in the past is so VASTLY different than he is and we just get a blip of explanation for that. Which essentially was just ‘I didn’t wanna have meaningless sex anymore’. But after being in the industry for TEN years? And shooting ‘sadistic’ videos? There should’ve been a deeper, or just more thorough explanation for this change or growth. And he even gets wayyyy sappier about the main character after their first encounter. If he truly hasn’t been in love before, and is used to having empty sex for TEN years, why would this encounter flip him on a dime? cuz this random young, and *seemingly* egotistical, av actor came from sex toys when he was spouting off that he wouldn’t? Makes no sense. It was like all of a sudden he had a come to Jesus moment that we never see lol. Or maybe a lobotomy? We don’t get to see enough true human feelings. Maybe it’s ironic, but IMO this story was super artificial, and seemed more like an amateur porno story rather than a smutty romance story.

A STEAMY AF SLICE OF LIFE . If you arent into slice of life, def avoid. I had no idea this would become an obvious slice of life piece, which resulted in me believing I’d reached the very end of the story on multiple occasions. After a few times of nearly passing out excitedly when it’d continued, I realized that the author just blessed us by running with it as a slice of life. A SLICE OF LIFE FULL OF SMUT? God, I don’t want it to ever end. On another note… why is Touma SO HOT? Ngl he’s threatening to steal the title of my #1 character crush, which is no mean feat. I will say that I NEED to see Natsume successfully and spontaneously take charge over Touma during sexy time. Cmon Natsume, shock Touma with so much sexiness that he couldn’t top even if he wanted to. For once, we need to see Toumas soul LEAVE HIS BODY instead of Natsumes.

Wow I was honestly prepared to leave this a SHINING review—then it just cut off randomly. To say I was caught entirely off guard is an understatement. Now I understand the reason it’s rated as it is. What a goddamn disappointment. I was slurrrrping this up, loving every moment of it. The part is cuts off at (or ends

Here for thissss!!! Honestly super excited to see how this unfolds since clearly something sus is going on behind the officers back

I love this so much! There’s so many elements that set it apart from other omegaverse, Yaoi, smutty stories! I especially love the representation of a divorcee, a single parent, and family/relationship dynamics when one of the parties has a child from a previous relationship. This is so precious!!!!

Very amateur storyline and writing. The pacing is god awful (I’m sorry… I was going to be gentle with this but I can’t think of any other way to properly describe it). One of the characters immediately becomes into the other character, all because he finds his c*m face cute. lol…

Amazing storyline, written extremely well! I honestly loved this! Every component was, *MUAH*, chefs kiss! It all flowed together nicely as well :)

Honestly, loved it. It’s def toxic asf and I wish there was a bit more development away from that into a healthy relationship but oh well, still fire!