Effy's manga / #Yaoi(30)

Here for thissss!!! Honestly super excited to see how this unfolds since clearly something sus is going on behind the officers back

I love this so much! There’s so many elements that set it apart from other omegaverse, Yaoi, smutty stories! I especially love the representation of a divorcee, a single parent, and family/relationship dynamics when one of the parties has a child from a previous relationship. This is so precious!!!!

Cute! End is a lil boring though and just kinda flatlines out.

Honestly I had expected to give this 5 ️s because I felt it was unique, interesting, a little twisted/dark, and the plot was well developed. There is noticeable, well paced, character development which I felt made this story high quality and strong. My reason for giving it 2️ is because the ending was extremely random and abrupt. It literally ends right when one character discovers that the other intentionally put his life in danger to manipulate him into living together and staying closely by his side. This was an important realization since it shows the extent of the toxicity still needing to be outgrown and changed, even with the growth there had been. So for the story to just stop right at a conflict point of the relationship?… It was like the author just got tired of writing 3/4 of the way through and just decided to write ‘the end’ after the last page they had worked on. Not to mention that there’s a whole backstory of essentially obsession and stalking that never surfaced in the relationship, leaving a large, important, and inevitable conflict. Bad way to leave a story.

I feel like I have super high standards for manga, especially romance/BL ones because they often seem to be amateurly written (lacking in flow, pacing, character development, structure, depth, etc). Anyways, I’m usually left feeling dissatisfied, even if it’s just with the ending, but I was pleasantly surprised with this one! It’s such a cute story and I never felt like anything was lacking. The ending also seemed very natural rather than rushed or misplaced, so I felt content when realizing there wasn’t any pages left! The characters are both very ‘soft’ and feminine, which I also adored since I seldom see that pairing in BL. It was just TOO STINKIN CUTE AND ROMANTIC!

Loveeee!!!!

Short smut story that is a part of a collection of multiple stories, definitely doesn’t make it into the top 3 of the collection, but it’s still fire!

This is

Okay all in all, I LOVE this whole ass story. You can easily tell the author put sooo much work into it. The storyline, and the art, is phenomenal. There are tons of panels that could’ve been made much simpler art-wise, such as scenes with pigmented, gorgeous sunset skies when they could’ve just been made the typical blue or whatnot. So you can tell the love and dedication that has gone into this. It shows, it shows! But WOW THE SIDE STORRRIESSS? UGHHHHHH. STOP. I better see a whole ass storyline play out with Do-Hyeok and Seo being endgame. Of course Do-Hyeok was suchhh a f-upped villain, but Seo really pulled the wounded child out of Do-Hyeok, and enlightened him to what it was really like for those that had been hurt by him. So… even with his past, I think they’re good for each other and will help each other grow. Obviously I’d be expecting a hella deep ass apology to Suha from Do-Hyeok first… but man I really hope we get a happy ending for this villain.

My new #1 favorite yaoi romance story, I LOVED IT SO MUCH Best couple and family EVER, in every aspect. The most gorgeously beautiful goddamn couple I’ve ever seen, AND THEIR BABY IS ALSO THE MOST GORGEOUSLY ADORABLE BABY IVE EVER SEEN, and they’re all so goddamn pure and sweet, my heart and soul will be forever happy now. I will say…. We didn’t get an explanation on why Yi-Rin chose the nickname Bell for Yi-Ho… which… hopefully we do in a side story cause I’m way too curious of a person. Yi-Rin left us hanging when he said he said he didn’t chose it with a bell in mind, SO WHY THEN?