Katania's manga / #Sweet(291)

i wanna see them cuddle or something and itd be brilliant if this got a sequel also. This author is amazing :) I only wish the seme(?) said I love you back at the end.

rui reminds me of myself so it was bit odd headstrong & very blunt

plot was incredibly rushed

feels like igawa compared to tatsumi when he got into jail really messed up the story vibes, i mean i understand reasoning but it made it feel different

I WISH THERE WAS MORE AAAA Development: 3.5/5 Plot: 5/5 Characters: 4.5/5 Art: 4/5 Final rate: 4/5 Definitely could've had more chapters and had more of a slowburn. Very sweet Makes you wish there was more from how quick it was. Psychic Powers

it's a little complicated in the panels at parts as if they're not spread out far enough, like it could probably be 8 chapters instead of 5. it feels like the writing was very tightly packed basically. overall it's very sweet and nice. and lovely, I would have loved to seen a more drawn out story though with the individuals. Could've gotten some more backstory for all the individuals, between tatsumi and yoh, between asatoshi and sataoshi, get a spinoff for asatoshi. I'm glad it wasn't a love triangle and it ended up as a happy throuple, they also could've dived into that dynamic a bit more with some afterstory. Overall probably a 7 or 8/10 it's really good but could've been better with some better writing. the story wasn't bad at all though. Bathroom scene with tatsumi was also very rushed feeling. i know this was very jambled im reading at 2 am and my thoughts are everywhere sorry if anyone actually reads this lmao Development: 3.5/5 Plot: 3.5/5 Characters: 4/5 Art: 4/5 Final rate: 4/5 Very tightly packed, could've been spread out more; I feel like there could've been more chapters with more backstory, also a bit rushed but overall 8/10 would've been higher if not for the rushed and jumbled feeling. Poly throuple

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GIVE ME MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS DOES NOT FEEL FINISHED AT ALL HOW DARE YOU Development: 2/5 Plot: 4.5/5 Characters: 4.5/5 Art: 5/5 Final rate: 4/5 Doesn't feel like it should be a oneshot, wish there was more. Oneshot