Yaoi Hands's manga / #Amnesia(3)

The story and art is good but I just feel like the dialogue and the way it was presented was kind of flat and monotone. The buildup to where he finally remembers doesn't feel emotional.

[2020-05-09 09:21 marked] Beautifully written script and moving story. The beginning was a bit iffy but right when it hit the rising action boy was it good. The story could have definitely been longer by fleshing out each character a bit more (like a scene where the secretary’s guilt is relieved by the MC). BUT I really loved this story and the MC is so lovable. I also love that he didn’t end up remembering because it made it so the ML is not stuck in the past but his current self.