i really like the art and think this is a pretty hot and surprisingly genuine little short comic.
my main criticism is i wish that narratively dohee would have come around more to bobin's point of view re: her posting porn videos because like. objectively what bobin does with her body is her choice and it felt a little icky for the narrative to sort off portray her posting videos as something that having a girlfriend would "fix" about her.
however what i really did enjoy was how surprisingly genuine to the lesbian experience this comic felt. there's a pretty clear thru line of dohee sort of grappling with her desire for women vs her disgust at pervy men, and while i think it would have ideally been explored a little further it's something i did not expect going into what i thought would be a fairly straightforward college situationship erotica. i found dohee relatable in a way i genuinely wasn't expecting and i really liked that aspect. I also really liked how bobin was portrayed as objectively hot in a way that girls with her body type rarely are. and it it doesn't hurt that she's kind of my exact type....
all in all, while i think there are areas that could have used improvement, this is a really worthwhile read, especially for sapphic readers. 4/5 for this short and surprisingly heartfelt horny gl
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