liveleak's manga / #smut(131)

the art style is 50/50. the MC looks cute and looks like james from silent hill (why i kept reading lol) and the MI... not that... appealing, unfortunately. the story is all over the place, tbh. the story behind MC's wife death cames through with two chapters all of sudden, the random stalker (that stayed friends with MC LMAO), the rape seemed so forced (brother in christ, couldn't you ask him for a date or something? he had a crush on him since high school, like...). nah, many mangas have these thropes but this one didn't have the charm, lol. only liked this bc MC's melancholy, miserable face, sadness... he was a vibe and i liked him. a shame we didn't get another type of story.

the art style was cute. i liked that MC had his pretty boy aura but his body had a 'realistic' anatomy? also, why does MI have a tiny waist smh... LOL i liked the weirdo secretary, okay?! the worldbuilding was basic. i wanted to see more outside of it, but i guess for something short, it works anyway. the story was so-so, since the 'main villain' or 'problem' was the stalker (which i loved, ahem.) i think his reason for being obsessed with MC was pretty nice. idk. i liked MC overall, MI... all characters were pretty good. also i felt weird everytime MC had sex with the damn octopus, LMAO. IDK. even more when it began to call him dad? LOL. anyway, pretty decent webtoon, i guess.

second couple was much better. first couple almost made me drop this

GRRRRR this could have been better if it was longer. it's the same yandere, crazy top trope but i was enjoying it anyway. but it just went too fast for things that need to be more develop and just went into shit. second MI could have had a better arc, but it got cut off for some reason and just felt rushed and useless. i liked that the MC "rehabilitated" and i actually liked the plot twist LOL but, again, if it was better developed it would have been much better. the backstory of MC was so short and just barely mentioned (like 2 scenes?" and didn't have any impact. also, the extra of their "happy life" was... ugh. art style was fire, tho. designs too. maybe that's why i gave it a chance.

I mean, this was kind of cute but everything happened too fast. Maybe 14 chapters would have been great, tbh. The characters are likeable and cute! (I also much preferred their past life :()

tf was this lmao there's nothing about this. the same shit over and over lmao author what did you intend with this